Saturday, March 28, 2009

rain

I want.
More of this rain
To touch me again
make me feel the wonder
the shudder and the thunder
drops on the ground
the drizzling sound
the earth so warm
a stream is born.
Someplace else
li'l droplets form
a river forlorn.
Me? I'm in daze
skin set ablaze
heart out of cage.
The rain treads
on untouched estate
trespasses my person
out on excursion!
to curves forbidden
to spheres hidden
mocking the rules
unstopped - unchecked
transgressing fearless
wandering on me
and how i love it

9 comments:

  1. hey blogmate ;) Splendid!! God is in rain!

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  2. @ Nishant
    Sure i will visit your blog and post my comments. Actually i have had a glimpse js now..nice work! And thanks for the appreciation!

    @ Navin
    Thanks!! it was btfl yesterday night.. awesome!

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  3. to curves forbidden
    to spheres hidden
    mocking the rules
    unstopped - unchecked
    transgressing fearless <--- brilliant insight. This part caught my attention realtime. I'm glad to have found your blog with such wonderful poetic masterpiece everywhere.

    Thanks for sharing
    rag

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  4. Hey good work yaar and its nice to know that u liked the post on my blog...thanks for posting ur comments..and as I said..plz spread this msg forward

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  5. @ Ragpicker. im glad you liked it. masterpiece, i can't say, but i like it more if i have enjoyed writing it. and i loved penning this down. :) thanks for visiting!

    @ Chhavi, thanks for the comment! cheers!

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  6. so very beautiful .. i wanna get drenched in this poetic rain !!

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  7. so lovely !! loved the rhymes here :)

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  8. always nice to see sm1 feelin the touch of rain so deeply ...

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  9. :) tks.. each time it rains.. its magical.. gud to know i'm with fellow rain lovers :)

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