Friday, May 22, 2009

MAKING LOVE (Acrostic)

My hand in yours
Arms interlocked
Kind words breathed
Illogical passion seethed
Nestled like a bird
Going going gone

Logic returns
Oh god! what happened
Valiant in love, I may have
Erred 
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7 comments:

  1. HinaMay 27, 2009 at 4:36 PM

    witty! :)

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  2. NaveJune 3, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    :D budding poetess i like this one ;)

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  3. NiyaaJune 3, 2009 at 3:32 PM

    ;) thanks

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  4. SiddharthJune 23, 2009 at 7:01 PM

    Nice attempt, but too short. Let the river of thoughts inundate pages ..

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  5. Harry (you knw who)July 13, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    ooooohhh....raunchy...!!
    nicee....n....steamy...!!
    :) :)

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  6. NiyaaJuly 13, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    hah! :P raunchy!! :P hah..it's got a twist in the end!

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  7. Harry (you knw who)July 13, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    :P HAH...bt who cares...for d twist....!! its nt luve widout d twist... :)

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