Well, am no poet.. i can only pen poems when emotional or when it is raining.. and well, this one was a mixture of both. I dont care abt rhythm, or stanzas or rhyme.. and well.. when u do that, u end up with smthing like this..! have a look.. js dont discourage a "poet unborn"!
Reminds me of you…
The falling drops and rustling leaves
Leave my heart wanting to be loved
It’s the scent of moist earth
That reminds me of you..
Of the moments spent together.
Hands entwined and heaving breath
We thought of times so far
We thought we’d sustain
We’ll show them we were..
Made for each other
I left you I confess,
Because I could not say a lie
I could not be with you
And bid my happiness goodbye
You were a treasure
You still are my dear friend
I miss you and need you
But I know I’ll be of no help
I’d enter your life
to leave you again
I don’t trust myself now
In matters of love, heart and pain
The scent of moist earth
Still reminds me of you
And my long lost love
It will never rot, it will never stink
Your memories are frozen
In my heart
I wish I had waited
I wish I didn’t love you that much
I wish I could see you crying
I wish I could change the person I am.
But the scent of wet earth still reminds me of you
And the times we spent together
When my happiness knew no bounds
It was just you you and you all around
I wish I could love someone that way again
I wish someone would love me the way you did
We drifted apart .. never to meet again..
Im sorry for all the pain
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ReplyDeleteread it again !! read it aloud.. its beautifully penned Neha. my fave lines are
ReplyDeletethe scent of wet earth still reminds me of you
and the times we spent together
when my happiness knew no bounds
it was just YOU YOU and YOU all around
You must write more :)
Hi Navin, thanks! thats encouraging.. My starving blog could do with sm comments! ;-p
ReplyDeleteMemories.. the footprints happiness leaves behind.. we wish to follow it again.. only to know dat footprints Over footprints again will cause no change.. its d Walk on other virgin lands.. d fresh sands..dat waits for us..
ReplyDeletei guess..dats wats called...movin ON..!
:) wow..nice trajectory of life! I know tere exams hain but unke baad i will make a blog for u and u have to write in it. Thats settled. Plus we will upload ur paintings and sketches too..been so long you sketched innit? (Hum dono mutual admiration club khol lein? hehe..!)
ReplyDeletenice one..
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